Throughout the great design of things you get a B- for hard work. Exactly where you actually lost me was first on the specifics. As they say, the devil is in the details… And that couldn’t be much more accurate here. Having said that, let me tell you exactly what did give good results. The article (parts of it) is certainly rather powerful and this is possibly the reason why I am making the effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can easily notice a jumps in logic you make, I am not really certain of exactly how you appear to connect your ideas that produce the actual final result. For the moment I will yield to your point however wish in the near future you actually link the dots much better.
Picks Martly